Cover- WWW- The choice of colour works well together EBI- Different fonts should be used to emphasise different information
Contents- WWW- Easy to read EBI- To simple, little information. The page looks to bare and the photographs look like they have been taken on your phone when your playing out.
Double page spread- Www-Information is easy to read EBI-Photographs were a consistent size and structured more professionally (use the photoshop grid). The questions should differ to other text even in a different cooler or italic/ bold.
Cover- WWW- the colour palette you've chosen stands out EBI- it would be better if the price and issue font was a little smaller
Contents- WWW- good use of pictures EBI- page number for the actual contents page is needed
Double page- WWW- the text is very neat and uniformed EBI- the questions should be in bold/ in a different colour so that it stands out to the reader so that they know that it is the question.
Cover- WWW- The colour palette you have chosen stands out which allows the front cover to look catchy. The image that you have used also has a different Mise-En-Scene which is effective. EBI- I would make the image and the text level with each other as this will make the magazine look more appealing because it is more organised.
Contents- WWW- A great use of images which allows the contents page to look well organised. EBI- To improve make the text smaller so there are more lines which then means you can make the images larger.
Double page spread- Www- I like the use of Benjamin Wakeford at the top of the double paged spread. EBI- The images used are good by I think you sould mix them p and also they need to be a more consistent size as they look very different.
Overall I really like your magazine and with a few improvements im sure magazine will be a great success.
Cover- WWW- The colours work well together, with a good choice of colour pallette. EBI- The same font is used for most of the cover, other fonts should be chosen for different pieces of text.
Contents- WWW - good use of colour pallete to continue the theme. EBI - perhaps a different font.
Double page spread - Www - Information is easy to read and understand EBI - the photographs were alligned better and stayed similar in size.
WWW- I like the dark red colour scheme that you have used. I also like the layout of the contents page. I also like the use of different images on your double page spread. EBI- The red colour scheme could be on the double page spread. The mast head could also be slightly bigger so that it stands out. On your double page spread you could also make sure that all pictures are in line with each other, especially the smaller ones.
Cover- WWW-Good bold masthead and i like the red colour scheme used throughout EBI-A different font style could be used
Contents- WWW-The heading on the contents page works well, colour scheme continued EBI-Used a different font for the page titles rather than the same used for the title
DPS- WWW-Clear layout EBI-Incorporated some of the colour red which was used on the two other pages
cover www: bold title stands out well ebi: make the price a different colour and the white writing on the front cover is hard to read because it clashes with the background
contents www: good layout and fits the genre ebi: layout wasn't so simple
double page www: good amount of images and text too ebi: crop the images and make sure they re inline with each other and the text too
Cover-
ReplyDeleteWWW- The choice of colour works well together
EBI- Different fonts should be used to emphasise different information
Contents-
WWW- Easy to read
EBI- To simple, little information. The page looks to bare and the photographs look like they have been taken on your phone when your playing out.
Double page spread-
Www-Information is easy to read
EBI-Photographs were a consistent size and structured more professionally (use the photoshop grid). The questions should differ to other text even in a different cooler or italic/ bold.
Cover-
ReplyDeleteWWW- the colour palette you've chosen stands out
EBI- it would be better if the price and issue font was a little smaller
Contents-
WWW- good use of pictures
EBI- page number for the actual contents page is needed
Double page-
WWW- the text is very neat and uniformed
EBI- the questions should be in bold/ in a different colour so that it stands out to the reader so that they know that it is the question.
Cover-
ReplyDeleteWWW- The colour palette you have chosen stands out which allows the front cover to look catchy. The image that you have used also has a different Mise-En-Scene which is effective.
EBI- I would make the image and the text level with each other as this will make the magazine look more appealing because it is more organised.
Contents-
WWW- A great use of images which allows the contents page to look well organised.
EBI- To improve make the text smaller so there are more lines which then means you can make the images larger.
Double page spread-
Www- I like the use of Benjamin Wakeford at the top of the double paged spread.
EBI- The images used are good by I think you sould mix them p and also they need to be a more consistent size as they look very different.
Overall I really like your magazine and with a few improvements im sure magazine will be a great success.
Cover
ReplyDeleteWWW- Good colour pallet and text size.
EBI- photo brightness could be improved.
Contents
WWW- clear numbers and text. The colour pallet is good.
EBI- Photo quality could be improved.
Double page
WWW- clean and neat. Simplistic colour scheme but it is effective.
EBI- Photo sizing needs to be equal.
Cover
ReplyDeleteWWW: I like the use of colour and the layout
EBI: possibly change the image so it fits better
Contents
WWW: I like the fonts and the maroon again
EBI: use another artist
DPS
WWW: good article length
EBI: use different mise en scene to add something different
Cover-
ReplyDeletewww- use of colour and layout
ebi- maybe variate in font but thts being picky as I cant think of anything!
contents
www- keeps with the theme very well
ebi- maybe fill the space by making everything bigger
DPS-
www- good layout and use of images and their distinguished backgrounds
ebi- maybe increase page numbers but being picky again
Cover
ReplyDeleteWWW - Background variations is good
EBI - Align font better
Contents
WWW - Descriptive headings are informative
EBI - Include more page numbers
DP Spread
WWW - Lots of text
EBI - If Ben wore a a red jumper to match the color pallet
Cover-
ReplyDeleteWWW- The colours work well together, with a good choice of colour pallette.
EBI- The same font is used for most of the cover, other fonts should be chosen for different pieces of text.
Contents-
WWW - good use of colour pallete to continue the theme.
EBI - perhaps a different font.
Double page spread -
Www - Information is easy to read and understand
EBI - the photographs were alligned better and stayed similar in size.
WWW- I like the dark red colour scheme that you have used. I also like the layout of the contents page. I also like the use of different images on your double page spread.
ReplyDeleteEBI- The red colour scheme could be on the double page spread. The mast head could also be slightly bigger so that it stands out. On your double page spread you could also make sure that all pictures are in line with each other, especially the smaller ones.
Front cover
ReplyDeleteWWW- Colour palette looks good across the cover
EBI- Other fonts could be used for different parts of the cover
Contents
WWW- Theme continues into the contents page which works well
EBI- Line up the text and images together
DPS
WWW- Easy to understand text as it's clearly laid out
EBI- Align the images with the text and also continue the colour scheme into the DPS
Cover-
ReplyDeleteWWW-Good bold masthead and i like the red colour scheme used throughout
EBI-A different font style could be used
Contents-
WWW-The heading on the contents page works well, colour scheme continued
EBI-Used a different font for the page titles rather than the same used for the title
DPS-
WWW-Clear layout
EBI-Incorporated some of the colour red which was used on the two other pages
cover
ReplyDeletewww: bold title stands out well
ebi: make the price a different colour and the white writing on the front cover is hard to read because it clashes with the background
contents
www: good layout and fits the genre
ebi: layout wasn't so simple
double page
www: good amount of images and text too
ebi: crop the images and make sure they re inline with each other and the text too