25 word speech -
Kurupt magazine, a magazine for house music loving 18-25
year olds who love to go to nightclubs and explore the latest dj’s and house
tunes.
I think that your pitch is very well organised, as I can clearly understand the audience that you are targeting for your magazine. Furthermore I also like the fact that you have chosen the genre of House Music as I feel their is a gap in the market for this type of magazine. On the other hand I think you should change the price of your magazine to a round total instead of it being £3.99.
I like how your pitch links in to the genre of music really well, meaning you can get your thoughts across really well. To improve you could include circulation figures to add more detail, but overall well done!
I like your use of the moodboard to help the audience visualise, and due to this it fits the genre really well. The key words you have chosen also help the audience to understand the type of magazine you are aiming for. To improve you could add net circulation based on similar magazine's net circulation.
I like this pitch it hink it was very effective. I also like the mood boarfd that you made to show the audience some examples of the genre that you have chosen.
An effective pitch that contains all key information. Supporting it with a mood board helps to visualise the magazine. To improve you could add more inspiration magazines.
I think that your pitch is very well organised, as I can clearly understand the audience that you are targeting for your magazine. Furthermore I also like the fact that you have chosen the genre of House Music as I feel their is a gap in the market for this type of magazine. On the other hand I think you should change the price of your magazine to a round total instead of it being £3.99.
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ReplyDeleteI like how your pitch links in to the genre of music really well, meaning you can get your thoughts across really well. To improve you could include circulation figures to add more detail, but overall well done!
ReplyDeleteI like your use of the moodboard to help the audience visualise, and due to this it fits the genre really well. The key words you have chosen also help the audience to understand the type of magazine you are aiming for. To improve you could add net circulation based on similar magazine's net circulation.
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ReplyDeleteGood understanding of your genre, the mood board is well designed and fits in well with your genre. Well done
ReplyDeleteGood 25 word pitch that includes all of the relevant information.
ReplyDeleteExcellent mood board to fit with the pitch. To improve a video could have been made but the mood board still portrays your ideas clearly.
ReplyDeleteI like this pitch it hink it was very effective. I also like the mood boarfd that you made to show the audience some examples of the genre that you have chosen.
ReplyDeleteAn effective pitch that contains all key information. Supporting it with a mood board helps to visualise the magazine. To improve you could add more inspiration magazines.
ReplyDeleteIt is a simple pitch, which I like as it allows your pitch to stand out. the chosen words link really well to your genre.
ReplyDeleteI like your pitch as it is simple yet effective. It includes all of the required information - well done.
ReplyDeleteI like your pitch as it is simple yet effective. It includes all of the required information - well done.
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